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Final Draft
Andy
Grade8
Have you ever heard about market economy is a large economy and mostly is in North America. Market economy is an economy that let people have their freedom and decisions. That makes people become more powerful because they have a lot of money. Poor people and rich people being treated differently because of market economy.
In market economy, the rich people have more power than poor people. In 1700s the US began the 1st slavery, some of the US poor people also been took to be slaves. Poor people needed to work no matter what, then the US came to Africa and taken all the black people. There was racism, the America treated them very badly. Racism continued going around the world and many people followed it. the US production was growing and people in US became really rich. All the rich people were greedy and they wanted more than they needed. They used slave because they didn’t want to lose their energy cause this was slaves job not them. Money can buy anything but it also cause bad thing, the bad thing was money changes your ability, your thinking or your decision. The US people think the poor people needed to do what they said them to do and there was no problem about it. After they used money to buy slavery now they change to human skin, they began to judge by the skin. Market economy gave people too much freedom, some of the people used that to do good things but some weren’t. there weren’t protection from market economy and there needed to have some rules so that they can followed the rules and do a good things.
In market economy, the poor people don’t have any freedom and they never can become rich. Because when the poor make their own money, the rich people also make money but double than poor people. That’s why the poor people never can become rich. In the story “Circuit” there is a family that have a very tough life. They live America, they need to work for a rich farmer, he provides place and land but with a very low salary. And that can’t improve their life. The children in that family one is can’t go to school but that kid can go to school when the season is finish. And other is have education but change school all the time, cause they need to change place to farm so that they can get more money. This situation is also in market economy, the different between rich and poor are the big gap in the middle. The poor people want to have better quality of life but they don’t have enough money to afford it, the rich people have a lot of money but they don’t know how to use it correctly they just keep for them self, they are a selfish person. The market economy doesn’t provide any protection or education, you provide for your self individually. In the story the kid at that ages need to go to school instead go working hard with their family, they need to get their own education, they need to have their own thinking and decisions. So that they can have their own future.
The equal between people never exist in market economy. All the people can help but it never changes the way it is, it will stay the same until you have the solution for it. They can have freedom but used that freedom for good things, don’t cross the line or it will have a bad consequence for the whole country.