Q.9

I think Don Anselmo is telling the story from his perspective. And the story will different becasue he tell the story in his way. And also the thinking will be different.If i tell the story i also have the different way telling the story and different way of thinking.

vocab Gentleman of rio en medio

negotiation- I buy a Ferrari and it cost $3000000. I was negotiation and they sell me for $200

Boundaries - Viet Nam boundaries after wars


Innumberable - there are many cells in our body when they die, they doubles it. it's was Innumberable

vocabs STOP THE SUN

1. Commotion: Peter S , Nick , Zack and John was commotion while I did a presentation.

2.Foundered: I was foundered in Math test , I was really sad.

3.Ruin: Earth Quake in Haiiti make alot of damage in that country and alot of ruin house and hospital, schools

4.Inert: When I sleep I lay on the bed and stay Inert.

Literary focus

 Question:#6

The meaning of the tile "Stop the sun is " they don't want the sun to rise up, cause when the sun rise up , every body must go to war and fight,and there are alot of poor people die in  every moment , every second , every hours . Terry dad is the only one who survive out of 54 men. He don't want wars, he just want peace. He don't want the sun to rise up cause he don't want to fight . 

short story

                                                                    Story writing

In the evening at my house (9:30 pm) my girlfriend come to house for the date. I’m was in the good mood for now, suddenly my girlfriend said : “I want to break up with you , we can’t continue anymore. I’m sorry” I was shock after that sentence , I was really depress. She walk away with the crying face , I know she don’t want but she must to because of some reason. I was stay still and alone in the house and I begin to drunk , I get into the car and drive along the road while I was drunk . I’m not focus on the road but in my mind was think about the time that I was having fun with my girlfriend. Suddenly my car was crash into the other car, the top of my car was broken and the all the smoke come out quickly. I get out of the car quickly and I know that my face was bleeding , I think when I was hit my face was the glass. I bleeding a lot but the person that I hit have no injury. And he calls the ambulance car come to pick me, the ambulance car come and pick me up to the hospital. The doctor said that: “ you need to stay in here for two weeks , you have a serious injury” I answer” ok , thanks doctor” Day by day I was feeling better, and I don’t think much about the happened with my girlfriend. I nearly forget all the bad thing happened to me in the pass. Tomorrow is the day that I come back to my house and have the normal with out girlfriend. But I can’t live in life with out a girlfriend ,and I started to travels around the city so that I can find a girlfriend easily, suddenly one day I find a pretty girl walk on the street and I try to make her love me, but I can’t because she is a Spanish girl and I don’t know how to speak Spanish. But I keep trying to find a girl that was perfect and match with me, while I was walking at  the park I saw another pretty girl sit in the chair, I want to ask her to be my girlfriend and it was opposite, the girl come and ask me “ do you want to be my boyfriend” I was surprised because she was ask me to be his boyfriend . I don’t think this was happened but now it is come true , and we decide to have date to day . That date was the best day ever in my life, day by day me and my girlfriend was more happier and happier. I one hundred percents forgot about the bad thing happened to me in , now I just relax and have fun with my girlfriend and don’t even think about it anymore. I realize that when you break up with some one or in trouble don’t be sad or depress and don’t do the stupid thing like me Ex: drunk while driving car or do some ting more crazier .

If you in that situation just calm down and think carefully what should you do next, ok.

You just need to start all over again so that you can take the experience from the last mistake and does it better this time. Remember one thing when ever you have a girlfriend; don’t mess up the relationship between you and your girlfriend. And some of the people don’t have a girlfriend or going to have one, must choose a girlfriend carefully and also don’t mess up with the relationship, ok.

                                                          GOOD LUCK

vocab

-rocky was rehabilitating very good after the huge depress because his father of car acident
-jackson was lucky , the teacher clemency he redo the test for his 15 exam.
-jerry is anguish cause he break-up with his girlfriend.
-This elusively tennis ball fast like the lighting flash.

writing focus

C.ronaldo is a soccer player for real madrid. He has black hair , he has a fuel hawk hair like me. He really famous , and he very good at freekick. C.ronaldo has many girlfriend.And  in the future i will be like him.I'm is his huge fan.

Interview

Where your parent from?
- They are form vietnam

What is your hobbies?
- listen to music and play games

What thing do you like to do the most?
-play games

What is he most important about you or your life?
- my family and my future

comparing:
-Me, parent is form vietnam and they are very important to me also my future.

vocab

Tedious : this TV show make me very tedious about it
Vaguely : while i do my test i vaguely remember what i study
Inquiring : I look at my broher with inquiring eyes because i think he was the one who copy my homework
Archaic : the food is so smelly because it was Archaic

vocab

presumptous : Nick presumptous do M.J dance but everyone hate it.
Credulity: Nick credulity hold Mary hand
hospitality: Nick welcome me into his house hospitality.
gnarled: Jerry skin get gnarled after play sport.

Andy going to impromptu  test for class
I tentatively suicide my self
I intently hit my friend in the face
I am onimous when i see a ghost.

draft

Draft

The trouble that I have is the time that I have a bad grade on math

The first time I take a quiz from math , that time I have a good grade but suddenly I see

the new game on TV so I quickly go to internet and download it. That game was so cool and I love it . I really enjoy the game then I forgot to do the math homework and also forgot to study for the Friday quiz. I play game every day from the day I download the game. Tomorrow I go to school my teacher checking the homework, but I didn’t do it so she taking my point. I don’t scare and I keep playing game and in the Friday morning , quiz day . yesterday I was playing game, I didn’t study for the quiz. When I done my quiz my score is 5 over 20 point. My teacher was very upset about the score that I got. So she give  the quiz to my parent. When my mom saw that she very angry and she shout at me. And she don’t let me play game anymore. At that time know that if we don’t study we don’t have the future. Then I don’t play game anymore and I focus on study. When is focus on the study for the rest of the year. When the end of the year I have a good score on math and every subject. My mom and my teacher is no more upset about me. That is my trouble and I has change. And the next time I never focus on game again , I just playing game in the weekend only . I don’t want to have a bad score in any subject.

I has change every thing.

Q.7 (FLOWERS FOR ALERNON)

I think charlie writing and reading are impressive as their learning with out help. And Dr.strauss use him for an experiment but Dr.nemur don't think that is a good ideas but Dr.strauss said he is what we need for the experiment. No one else can learn read and writing good as charlie . Also charlie is the volunteer to do the experiment. He also hard working